Today I wrote a scene (well, need to write and ending, so about 3/4 of the scene) that I actually LIKE! Seriously LIKE! That's a huuuuge deal. Though it has a lot of "she", "her, "he" and "his" in it ... that means I don't know much synonims for he, she, her, his. Or how to make sentences more interesting. Mainly it's just really simple english. But I'll manage. No, no. I'll learn. The start really has totally simple sentences but in the almost-ending they get more and more complicated.
Suddenly she felt a burden on her shoulders. She twitched from surprise but felt relieved when she realizet it was ________ (insert a name for a man that you like) hugging her with his tiny but strong arms.
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